😱Chosen one is killed in Chapter1
🗡️Her badass, disabled ex-GF must triumph over a dysfunctional family of gods or meet a fate worse than death: be enslaved for eternity
❤️Forbidden Love
🔥Hot Banter
🏳️🌈
#LGBT
#POC
cast
🫂Found Family
🌈Color Magic
#amquerying
#F
#DIS
#OWN
#ND
#MH
No offense to any agent, but I like this comment someone made on Query Tracker
"If you judged LOTR by the first five pages of The Fellowship of the Ring, you'd think it was a story about a short rich guy adopting a cousin who shared his birthday so they could celebrate together."
I just got a form rejection from an agent I really cared about. I know it isn't personal, but it hurts all the same.
Then I checked Twitter & realized I lost a follower!
#WritingCommunity
, I don't want to seem desperate, but it would mean a lot to get another follower.
This is me trying to not name that super-popular book I absolutely hated with every cell in my body because the last time I dared to mention something remotely honest about it, people lost their sh*t, called me names, & almost burnt me at the stake!
But the book is 100% garbage!
#writers
who use verbs other than "said", please do! Let's put aside this nonsense debate of only using "said". People do "whisper", "mutter", "shout", etc. If you prefer using "said", then write what you like. No need to force your preference on others
#WritingCommunity
#booktwt
Tell me a story about yourself that sounds like a lie but is absolutely true.
I once punched a nightclub bouncer!
I was walking past the club. The bouncer started chatting me up, insisting that I enter his club. I declined. He proceeded to grope me. So I punched him! Not sorry!
Tell me a story about yourself that sounds like a lie but is absolutely true.
I was once on CNN cos the most wanted terrorist in Greece was caught hiding out in our hotel.
I rather literary agents, employers, & frankly all people were honest & straightforward about their reasons & expectations. I understand that the fear of public outcry or even legal action makes them hide behind vague formulations. But not knowing why I get rejected is killing me
Some jerk just made very offensive comments on my post out of the blue. I told him he may unfollow me & asked him to delete his horrible comments but he instead blocked me so I blocked him back!
Some say one shouldn't block others, but this guy deserves to be blocked.
🧵This morning, my beloved son Loki passed away after sustaining injuries from a speeding car last night. After rushing him to the vet, the X-ray showed a broken pelvis, massive abdominal bruising & signs of blood in his lungs. I could not bear his gut-wrenching screams due to
At a conference, a fellow scientist groped me in front of others. When I turned him down, he followed & assaulted me at my hotel. The next day my colleagues who had seen us together were laughing at me, chiding me, saying "Don't you know he's married & just had a baby!"
Like WTF!
As a woman who has survived attempted abduction, 3 sexual assaults, daily sexual harassment by countless men (especially at the workplace), & used to be followed by herds of men shouting obscene stuff they wished to do me when I was 13, I rather take my chances with a bear!
Why (many) beta-readers expect everything to be completely clear at each point in the text & complain if there's room for questions even if they're answered by the end of the chapter?
You don't expect a murder mystery novel to start by telling you who's done it!
#WritingCommunity
Why do so many people think a world that has "engineers" & "industrial revolution" can't be a
#fantasy
world!
A fictional world & planet can definitely have those without being Earth.
Have you not heard of Gaslamp Fantasy?
"Discworld" has engineers for example.
#WritingCommunity
The assassination of the chosen Empress drags her neurodivergent ex-GF & polar opposite, Sy, into an inheritance war brewing in a family of gods more dysfunctional than Sy’s.
🔥Banter & Dark Humor
🌶️Corsets unlaced
🌈Color Magic
🫂Found Family
🏳️🌈
#LGBTQIA
&
#POC
cast
#amquerying
All-time plotter, first-time pantser here! How do you
#write
when you have no idea where the plot is leading?
I've just started a WIP to cope with having to gut my debut novel. I love my new characters & setting. But I don't know how to continue.
#writingtips
#WritingCommunity
Another pitch event is over. Did 4 pitches. Got zero likes from any agent/editor. But got liked by a cam-girl...!
My pitches were supported by about 70 writer friends.
I supported hundreds of pitches & met over 100 new writer mutuals.
So, it's still a big win.
#WritingCommunity
So after that beta-reader insisted I cut the entire flashback fight scene & focus on the more tense present time of 2 people talking! Am I being obstinate by adding another 76 words to that flashback to make it more relevant to the plot & what's happening in the present timeline?
A critique says a flashback to a badass fight scene "takes away the tension" & "since she's still alive, there's not a lot of tension in the fight itself"
Do you agree,
#WritingCommunity
?
We know heroes survive & lovers in a romcom end up together, yet we still watch them, right?
14 months of
#amquerying
with only form rejections. I've sent out just below 70 queries. There are of course, hundreds of agents left on my list. & I haven't queried my dream agents yet.
Should I keep querying, indie publish, self-publish, or something else?
#WritingCommunity
So many agents/editors say "Bonus point if your story has a romance".
I'm not against Romance, yet it's already a huge genre/market. Only a fraction of agents/editors accept
#fantasy
, & almost all of those want Romantasy.
But what about us high fantasy
#writers
?
#WritingCommunity
Hi
#WritingCommunity
! It's time for a little public declaration! I didn't intend for it to sound like a
#poem
!
I'm going to delete all negativity & the rejection letters. I'm going to work on writing the sequel to my novel! Tune in for some snippets soon!
Ben describes Jessie as Generous, very funny (but good audience & receiver), & cool (unlike him) & the coolest he knows!
Jessie says Ben is comfortable / comforting / cozy, funny but not as much as her, & talented.
Ben Barnes & Jessie Mei Li at
#ASOCAS3
#ASOCAS
#ShadowAndBone
Oh, my! Querying is hard enough. But now I can no longer enjoy most books. My brain automatically flags errors and shortcomings in every sentence. It's exhausting! And honestly, it's disheartening to see the double standard.
"Show not tell", they said.
"Don't use filler words like 'feel'", they said.
Then I describe something "boiling the MC's blood", & they say "OK, but how does she 'feel' about it?"
There's no winning with them, is there?
#WritingCommunity
#booktwt
#writers
#amquerying
#amwriting
I can't write what the market wants. But I'm hoping what I write is what people want to read.
And I know many want to read it. They told me so themselves!
I was never "the market" as I grew up reading fantasy that didn't represent me. I write for those like me.
@MadelynKnecht
Though "pacing" & "action" do matter, without the world-building, character arcs, and that modicum of introspection as the MC grapples with their messed-up circumstances, the whole novel is just a bunch of random people stabbing each other for no reason!
I reached 4,000 followers!!! Thank you to all who follow me, I obviously couldn't have done it without you!
❤️❤️❤️
I keep supporting the
#WritingCommunity
by committing to follow back all fiction
#writers
.
If you're a fellow fiction writer & I've missed your account, let me know.
Agent: I want more
#Neurodivergent
representation.
Neurodivergent
#writers
submit
#novels
featuring authentic Neurodivergent characters.
Agent: Unfortunately, I couldn't connect with your character/work. So I have to pass.
Neurodivergent writers:???
#askagent
#WritingCommunity
I got a form rejection from
#PitDark
! Huzzah!🥳
Since everyone is celebrating their PitDark likes & full requests, I believe there must also be a celebration for those of us who either didn't get any likes or got next-day form rejections!
#amquerying
#amwriting
#writingcommunity
What sex scenes and fight scenes in a novel have in common is that they should always serve the plot. I don't shy away from writing them. But it's not about step-by-step technical descriptions! It's about characters & their emotions, senses, & goals. & It should move the plot.
This is my first
#NaNoWriMo
. I'm going to work on two WIPs: A high fantasy heist (sequel to my debut) & a cyberpunk (Sci-Fi) dystopian romance.
What about you,
#WritingCommunity
? Tell me about your projects for
#Nanowrimo2023
.
When the chosen Empress is killed, her disabled ex-GF and polar opposite, Sy must triumph over an ancient, dysfunctional family of gods, or face her worst fear: living forever.
🔥 Hot Banter
🕶️Dark Humor
🌈Color Magic
🫂Found Family
🏳️🌈
#LGBTQIA
&
#POC
cast
#questpit
#amquerying
@The_Ace_Couple
That's brutal. People are often too quick to dismiss any issue that doesn't directly affect them without trying to understand the ramifications of remaining a silent witness to atrocities.
I can only hope that soon Aces get the same level of protection as others.
Out of curiosity, can you guess my gender-identity, sexual-orientation, race, nationality, age, religion, & any other marginalized identity traits?
To help, here are two completely unedited and unfiltered photos.
@writes_isa
I use google docs to write/draft/edit because I can also use it on my phone on the go or in bed when an idea keeps me up. I don't even have MS word!
I've got scrivener for compiling into pdf & epub. But it's not user-friendly enough imho for writing. & no mobile option.
I've locked/protected my account because of all the trolls who attacked and trashed me for an innocent post I made. I was planning to unlock it soon. But it has been so peaceful and quiet that I'm tempted to keep it locked for a while longer!
Another day, another user takes my post out of context to accuse me of things I did not say or mean. Why people love to do that is beyond me. You can make your point, whatever it may be, without using my posts. NOT everything I post is about YOU. My account is NOT about YOU.
Are you kidding me Twitter (X or whatever you call yourself these days) algorithm?!😲
How did my silly post get 20K views in a couple of days when so many deep posts I put my heart & soul into barely reach 500!
I know most of us use this place as a refuge from life but still...!
I was shocked & embarrassed when 2 friends said my "Thanks a lot." sounded passive-aggressive.
The problem isn't them but that others had found my usage of exclamation marks as sarcastic!
Basically:
"Thanks a lot." => passive-aggressive
"Thanks a lot!" => sarcastic
So what now?🤷♀️
@timmckay52
It'd be sexist to think women can't be villains!
Some of my favorite villains are women.
The reason some female villains written by men end up being sexist is not the fact of being a villain but how they're usually over-sexualized femme fatale, lacking depth/personality/substance
Dear random user!
You're NOT the center of the world. Not every post is for or about YOU.
I can't fathom what possessed you to respond to posts of people you don't follow, saying "Who cares?"
My followers do care!
[Tbh, you do too or you wouldn't be bothering to respond!]
This time, I deserve to brag! I just cut 282 words from my beloved prologue. It was harder than hacking off my right arm!
Dear
#WritingCommunity
, does it feel this hard when you have to cut your beloved texts? What was the hardest you had to do?
#writers
#amwriting
#amquerying
Not long ago, I finally joined Twitter after years of resisting it.
My goal & focus have been our wonderful
#WritingCommunity
.
I'm proud to announce that I've garnered 3,273 followers in just 12 months!
I wish to thank all my dear friends & followers for making this possible🎉
🧵Today, someone used a well-meant tweet of mine, twisted it, and made accusations about me, calling me selfish because I dared to say that a bunch of tweets don't end wars. I stand by what I said. To think that your tweets save lives is naive at best & honestly self-centered.
@MitziMasha
I agree! Besides, being a divorced woman was seen as a failure, a lack of character, and worse. Many people still look down on divorced women & love to make up bizarre lies to slander them
I was NOT surprised by the disgusting actions of my assailant nor by the cruelty of my colleagues. But I am shocked by how many comments here put the blame on me. Have you not lived in this world? Don't you know women aren't believed, her word against his? Women get slut-shamed.
I had a blast reading & boosting thousands of your brilliant
#JoyPit
pitches full of dragons, squirrels, & fluffy cats! Huge thanks to
@JoyPitch
& everyone participating!
While I got no agent likes, I made 60 new followers &
#writer
friends!🥰
#writingcommunity
I want to thank everyone who participated in today’s
#JoyPit
- Authors, Agents and Editors. A huge huge thank you.
#JoyPit
2024 has officially come to a close and what a blast it was…
Wishing all authors best of luck as you go ahead with your querying journey. Rooting for you
Why sending queries is always so exhausting!
#amquerying
writers, do you also feel like you need a day off after sending out a query?
I guess it's really the emotional & mental cost that is much worse than any physical exertion.
#WritingCommunity
#writers
#amwriting
#Authors
Am I brave for posting this or stupid for upsetting agents with my honest opinion which most ND people I know share?!
I choose brave. I was born in an active warzone, survived a genocide, & grew up in one of the most brutal dictatorships in the world.
I'm a fighter, not a coward.
Don't want to brag but... Actually, I do! I managed to cut 173 more words from my chapter/sample pages for
#amquerying
! The text was already pretty tight. So this is a big deal!
#WritingCommunity
#writers
When the chosen Empress is killed, her disabled ex-GF & polar opposite, Sy must triumph over an ancient, dysfunctional family of gods or be enslaved for eternity.
🔥Hot Banter
🕶️Dark Humor
🌈Color Magic
🫂Found Family
🏳️🌈
#LGBTQIA
&
#POC
cast
#questpit
#amquerying
#F
#ND
#DIS
#OWN
I'm at the Goat Tavern 🐐 preparing the legendary
#SaveShadowAndBone
&
#SixOfCrowsSpinoff
party!
Thrilled to see you all, whether in person or through the livestreaming.
Watch it live at:
Are you still watching our campaign, dear show daddy
@netflix
?!!
I'm confused. An agent's MS-wishlist says they are "a huge Sarah J. Maas fan" & Grisha Verse with their favorite being King of Scars. But they also say they "simply can’t do blood, even on the page!"
But those books have oceans of blood spilled & King of Scars has major violence!
A year of querying has proven to me that the most important things are:
Being able to write a great query
The story fits the current market trends
LOTS OF LUCK
...
Down the line, a well-written manuscript helps too!
Your idea being unique is only gonna make it harder to sell.
I would like to thank my more than 70 beta readers for sharing their feedback even when I cannot incorporate or use all of their ideas. Please know that I do respect & appreciate your opinions. But I have to separate taste from objective critique.
#WritingCommunity
#amwriting
NETTLE & BONE x CROOKED KINGDOM
Quill must trap Emperor’s soul before he kills her again.
Buttressed by pragmatic cynicism, Sy's grumpy/sunshine split personality must fight ancient gods by becoming what she most fears or be enslaved for eternity.
#MoodPitch
#F
#LGBT
#OWN
#MV
#MH
The questioner asked, "Is it considered a red flag if he/she has an android?"
Don't judge people based on their phones!
The real question should have been: "Is it a red flag if he/she is an android?!"
In which case, my answer would be: "Depends! Is he hot?!"
My page promises to follow back all fiction writers. So if you're a fiction
#writer
following me & I haven't yet followed you back, please let me know here.
Please introduce yourself & feel free to use this post to find other writers to follow.
#WritingCommunity
The assassination of the chosen Empress drags her neurodivergent ex-girlfriend & polar opposite, Sy, into a divine inheritance war within a dysfunctional family of gods
🔥Banter & Dark Humor
🌶️Corsets unlaced
🌈Color Magic
🫂Found Family
🏳️🌈
#LGBTQIA
,
#POC
, &
#ND
cast
#questpit
#F
I'm finally home and mostly intact after a busy 2-day trip to the even busier
#London
. The storm, transport delays, and my very heavy backpack will take time to recover from.
But I'm glad I got to meet all the wonderful fans at the
#saveShadowAndBone
#SixOfCrowsSpinoff
party.❤🥰
Please convince me to finish The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. So many insisted it's great, & I must read it. I am really trying my best.
But if it were my book, beta readers would have crucified me for slow pacing, too much exposition, unrealistic characters...
#booktwt