R is our school's top English student. She got 9 at GCSE. She got A at AS. She is studious, precise, deeply thoughtful. She has just had her A Level grade reduced from A* to C, apparently just because she goes to a disadvantaged school. It might help if you liked her poem.
The kids always write the best poems after they've stopped listening to me. For example, I usually tell them to avoid rhyming couplets, because they govern the poem and tend to be comic - but this has heavy rhyme, and it's heartbreaking.
I've registered my father's death, two weeks after my mother's. The cause of death was given as old age and 'takotsubo cardiomyopathy' which, the GP tells me, is the medical term for a broken heart.
I've posted this before, but there are so many children in Syria whose names can't even be recorded, let alone their poems. Mohamed is 12 and from Damascus.
When people think of Oxford, they think of OX1 - historical, beautiful, rich as Mayfair. But Anna lives in OX4, as ethnically mixed and deprived as Hackney, and this is her poem about it. She's 17.
Some kids write hundreds of poems, like Freya and Flora. Some kids just write one, and this is Jamie's. I think he was 11. 'My life is a seed/waiting for water.'
These are the students who are suffering. The high-achieving outliers in disadvantaged schools. I can't understand why Ofqual couldn't have sent the adjusted grades to schools in July and asked for appeals and adjustments BEFORE this destruction was done.
Congratulations to the winner of the
#OrwellPrize
for Political Writing 2020, Kate Clanchy (
@KateClanchy1
), chosen for her reflections in 'Some Kids I Taught and What They Taught Me' (
@picadorbooks
) on teaching and how her students' stories offer insights into British society
All my 'very quiet foreign girls' are now graduates: from Oxford, St Andrews, London, and Reading. They all came from migration and absolute disadvantage. Poetry, idealistic teachers, and a multicultural school got them there.
The best way to relieve the pressure on GCSE Literature 2021 would have been to restore open book exams, not to make poetry optional. Then students could have read lots of diverse, inclusive poems instead of spending hours memorising quotes.
Sidney is 16, of Jamaican heritage, and from London- he just arrived in my class
@EMBScollege
. Please tell him he's a poet twitter, I think he needs to know.
Phoebe watched her poem being liked on twitter last week and grew in confidence before my eyes. Then she sat down and wrote this. She tells me she's really bad at English.
Parents struggling with fronted adverbials this morning: this is not a basic piece of knowledge you have failed to learn: it’s a complex, not-universally agreed, label for an ordinary bit of language. Grammar is not ‘the basics’ of language: it’s the description of how it works.
Oh course I am very proud that my student Mukahang has won the Dart Prize at the University of Oxford. But I'm even prouder that the winning poem is for his mum. He's 19.
Shukria got a First! In PPE from Goldsmiths. It's incredible! I'm going to have to make a thread to explain how incredible. Here is a poem Shukria wrote 8 years ago, when she had been in the UK 6 months. And here she is last year, at the UN.
Something to celebrate: Aisha kept her place
@QMUL
yesterday despite her downgrade to D in English. She really has ‘slipped off her dyslexic coat’, as she longed to in Year 8.
I know everything is terrible. But look, Mohamed is happier. He is writing about his life in a refugee camp and his life here, and here is better, now. He is 13 and from Syria.
Mohamed lost so many things when he came here from Syria, but one of them was being top of the class, brilliant at Arabic. Now his language is locked inside him, but it does make poems.
#LiteratureMatters
,
@creativelangs
Overwhelming to see all the love for Aisha. This is from when she was 12, and so dyslexic she could hardly write at all - except poems. She really has forged a sword from her unsettled words.
Friends homeschooling tomorrow: the best way I ever found to teach paragraphs was to write a story about a snake or other incongruous creature in a department store. Each time the snake moves department, you start a new paragraph. That's it.
Linnet fans, Linnet has an offer to read Maths and Philosophy at Oxford. Yes I know it’s not English, but it is from a disadvantaged comprehensive and she has always had a thing for Maths.
If you take ten minutes at the beginning of the lesson to ask your students what sort of boots the wind is wearing this morning and what coat she has on, then no one's GCSEs will be harmed and poems will probably occur. Helen was 14.
The oral component of Modern Foreign Languages GCSE is also being scrapped for next year because of COVID. Like making poetry optional, it sends a powerful signal to schools and students about what is dispensable Speaking is central to languages. Poetry is central to English.
Simon Armitage published my first book. I’ve used his poems with every class I’ve ever taught. He came to visit our school and talked to every child and didn’t ask a fee. I’m so glad he’s going to be Poet Laureate.
'I bless you /as you take down your thick posters, tack by tack,/ and roll them up like wrapping paper.' Please read Esme's tribute to her teacher, and pass it on for all teachers retiring today.
But this year my mum got ill and Michael contracted covid 19 on her end of life visit. Five days after she died, he had a stroke, and, as he had always wanted, died serenely at home. I loved him and will him miss him so much.
Aisha has her 3 Bs at A Level now. But I think she's most pleased that
@QMULsed
read her writing portfolio and saw past her dyslexia, and gave her a place. When she wrote this, she was 14 but her spelling was assessed as 8.
Mukahang got a
#Oxbridge
place this year. His 'context' is EAL a single parent family, weekend job as a cleaner, a sixth-form education which cost 15% of the fees at Stowe,. He's a published poet and A* student. Which Stowe student thinks they should have his place?
The news is like a dystopian novel but at least I have found the right poem. This is my very shyest poet: she was 14.
'What's it like being lost?/the road asked.
This is in an end-of-decade thread for Aisha. When I met her she was 11 and very determined to write poetry. She was also very, very dyslexic: she really had difficulty spelling her own name. But every time I typed up her strange pothooks some incredible emerged...
In anticipation of the A Level results, and to remind us all of the foolishness of exams, I'm going put up series of Downgraded Poems. First up, and downgraded from A* to B at AS Creative Writing for using simple language, My Mother Country, Rukiya Khatun.
Mukahang and Helen have got their stellar A Levels and are
#GoingtoOxford
No privilege, tutoring, private school anywhere in sight. Lots of poems though.
Mukahang got his A*s and his Oxford place yesterday. In celebration, a part of his epic poem, The Cleaners, written for his mother and the housekeepers of the world.