Literary Agent, Spencerhill Associates. Twin mom+1 Eclectic in life & books.
#TeamSpencerhill
Ali-ensπ½rock! Wanna read a good book? See my clients πβs upπ!
Can we talk about college degrees? College is a wonderful place to learn to learn, grow your brain, & figure yourself out. Sometimes we end up doing what we studied, other times not. Give your degree & where you ended up.
I'll go first:
Degree: Journalism
Job: Literary Agent
Authors if you get an offer from a publisher doing an open submission like Berkley, Harlequin & others, pls remember to reach out to agents for representation at that point. I've signed authors with these deals who now we have multiple deals. I've increased offers 75% of original
I am BEGGING retailers to stop cropping every cute shirt. Even if I hadn't given birth to twins, I am 40-ahem-something woman who wants to keep all that under wraps, k!? Please help a girl out.
I always used to see the "big agents" tweeting about closing several deals all in the same day, & I was like, "Wow, so cool. Will I ever get there?" And today I get to say, "I'm working on closing 3 deals today." So my new agent friends, it's gonna happen.
As I open to queries today, I join my fellow agents and editors in the sheer fear of future volume, but also a lot of excitement at finding those projects destined to become books. Let's go do it!
Let us never forget that many authors enter the world of publishing and querying doe-eyed, not always considering it a business, but only an art, and do not understand protocols. So if you're new here, let's start with the basics: How to Query, The importance of Word Count 1 of 2
A thing I think we lose sight of in YA lit is that the sometimes frowned upon "insta-love" in books can just be code word for very normal teenaged "crushes." Normalize the fact teenagers fall in & out of "like" (not love) VERY frequently. Most kids aren't finding soulmates at 17!
I answered 250+queries today. Lots of reasons I pass: already rep similar, hook not strong enough, concept already flooding market, writing not there yet (most often reason-so keep writing), opening not strong, objectionable content(!!), don't rep it, not my cup o'tea but awesome
Hello to all editorial assistants out there still incognito. If your name isn't yet in Publisher's Marketplace, I'd love to connect and lets get it in there. I'm sure some of my agent buddies would love to help! Right, agent buddies? :)
I NEED COFFEE. Two of my authors are waiting on revisions. Another is waiting for me to read a full. I've got my country's 500th anniversary to plan, my wedding to arrange, my wife to murder, and Guilder to frame for it. I'm swamped.
Lots of writers get caught up in what I call, "giving stage directions." The protag does this, looks here, makes a face, interspersed w/dialog, joined by character B who sounds like x, add dialog, back to protag. Needed yes, but don't forget the emotion in narration
#writetip
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My opinion on older teens trick or treating this (& every year). Many of them didn't get to go out last year when they were "younger." They've also lost out on so much fun in general b/c ofπ¦ . They're not out partying, doing drugs, drinking, etc. So give them your candy & smileπ
I don't envy querying writers right now. I know it's hard in general, but it really does feel like it's harder now than ever before. Because of the sheer volume we receive lately, seems like more people are writing, or writing faster & acquisitions *feel* like they're slowing too
ATTENTION QUERYING AUTHORS WITH OFFERS!
Reminder to send a notice to EVERY AGENT you've sent your query to. Not just the ones who've requested a full or partial. Send notices to all agents too who have not responded yet. EVERYONE OF THESE AGENTS MAY COMPETE FOR YOU.
Hey yβall donβt discount newer agents who work for reputable agencies. Query them! They have support systems in place - from contract negotiations forward. Ran across the blog post a while back with people saying they wouldnβt query me because I was new.
If people didnβt take the risk to write for the first time or write NEW stories and query those stories or pitch them to editors at conferences or do contests, then we would only have OLD books. Be the one to dare to dream. Be the NEW. Dreams sometimes come true.
Why you SHOULDN'T be afraid to query your story:
-The market ISN'T oversaturated
-There is NO SUCH THING as a bad idea. Sharknado has 6 sequels!
-Someone needs to write the next Harry Potter
-Someone will LOVE your story
-Your story deserves to be read
-Because it's your dream
Just wanna say a good reason for writers to stay on Twitter, carve out communities through follows and lists, is not only "the community" itself, though we can bring the drama, but awareness of things like when on today with that web site that scraped a ton of published books.
I've been seeing a couple of my northern-based agent & editor friends using the word "y'all" in tweets lately, & I secretly hope that I've had some influence on their lexicon by my constant use of y'all's in tweets. Gonna sneak in some "yes ma'am's" to test the theory. π
I just love running across deal announcements for authors I've offered rep to, but who chose a different agent. I always keep an eye on ya'll and celebrate your success!
To
#amquerying
crowd. Up too late rereading/finishing an edit on a clients book I started before vacay. I'm so taken with what an excellent writer she is, wondering how it's possible I'm her 1st agent? Let it be a lesson. The talent is out there. Some of you just need to be found
It is a truth, universally acknowledged, that when you step away and leave your laptop open with your client's manuscript on screen, that your cat will come along to "help" you edit. "Help" being a very loose term.
@sanchez_m_m
I ran the numbers through QueryTracker and 20% of authors who landed agents queried 100 or more agents before getting their offer. So don't give up too early.
Periodic reminder to the
#amwriting
#amediting
#amrevising
people that emailing yourself a copy of your document after a writing/editing session can save you tons of heartache if a hard drive crashes or a laptop is stolen. Get into the habit! Itβs a good one.
While youβre querying one project, write something different. Write something new. Keep learning and practicing your craft. Donβt ever become satisfied. Stay hungry. You want to be a writer? Thatβs what writers do. Even published ones.
#WritersLife
#querytip
SHE SAID YES! SHE SAID YES! SHE SAID YES!
Breath, Ali, Breathe! Please help me welcome the uber-talented
@RebeccaFKenney1
to
#TeamSpencerhill
. Ima bring you her vicious hungryπ§ββοΈmermaid swarm & their threat to an island nation soon!
ATTACK ON TITAN X meets TO KILL A KINGDOM!
That moment when you read a query and you immediately go check to see if they already have an agent, because the query is just that good... now to read the sample...
I will say this: This writing journey can get discouraging, pouring your heart out on paper, having it broken by rejections in the query trenches, it can be so hard. I get it. But when you find your person, when they canβt stop smiling reading your work, then it all becomes magic
Sending good vibes and peace to all authors on sub (mine included). Agents are swamped. Editors are swamped. Itβs summer. Your work is simply waiting in someoneβs inbox to be discovered like the buried treasure it is!
Okay
#amquerying
crowd. I've put together a list of former/current agents & editors who offer services on queries, your synopsis, manuscripts, etc. If you're looking for feedback, here's how to get it:
I'm so excited to welcome
@CasieBazay
to
#TeamSpencerhill
! Casie has such a gift & it's not an understatement to say this beautiful, fantastical, moving romantic story has had a permanent place in my head & heart for many years. Can't wait for you to read this gorgeous romantasy.
BIG NEWS! This past year, I was querying my 6th book, but had a lovely surprise last month.
@HerringAli
reached out, asking to see my very 1st book, a YA time travel romance. She'd read it as an intern in 2016 & loved it. Guess what? She still loves it & I JUST SIGNED WITH HER!
Reading queries right now & one of the main reasons Iβm quickly passing on some is word count wildly over or wildly under publisher expectations for genre/age group. Youβve either heard this a million times or this is your 1st, but this could be a reason youβre getting rejections
This little goofball got his wings today. Despite his health issues in the last weeks, saying goodbye to a little person who has been with us most of his 15 yrs was really hard. Bye Neville the Devil. May there be a fire hydrant with your name on it in heaven. I know u'll use it.
Iβm a person of βοΈ faith. My kids are also IVF babies. I also use birth control & Iβd really really like other Christianβs to stay out of my business. Stop trying to control literally everything about womenβs bodies & reproduction. Who gave you the right?
Whispers: I am open to queriesβ¦
CAVEAT: We are a βone response is a response from allβ agency so choose wisely who you query at Spencerhill. We do forward each other queries tho.
SECOND: Iβm no longer Spencerhillβs only kidlit Agent!
@bethanyfulk
is also open to queries & β¦
It's wild to think there are people out there waiting to be discovered. I hope I get to discover a bunch of the writerly ones. Maybe I can start calling myself a treasure hunter?
#MSWL
when I reopen in January, one thing (not the only thing) I'll be looking for is a lot of genre stuff that is very either funny or satirical or slightly weird, or quirky. Think genre+this. Scifi, fantasy, romance, speculative, thriller, action/adventure, horror--kid & adult.
Literally me answering your queries is so hard. On my end, you have to know I'm thinking: do I love this? Will readers love it? Is there a market for it? Do I know editors who want it? Do I already have something similar/too much on my list? Do I fight for this?
I have now answered every query in QM I received PRIOR to closing to queries at the beginning of summer. I've got inbox zero for when I reopen tomorrow.
I believe good stories sometimes hide behind slow starts. So ask your CPs when they finally βfall into the story,β where they canβt stop reading. Figure out how to start there. Agents donβt haveβ°to find that spot when reading samples! Donβt miss opportunity
#writetip
#querytip
@ItsSoLinz
Bet other women blessed with a more βdemureβ chest would be allowed to wear that. This is what we call the Double D Double Standard. π
If I think about the millions upon millions of words that come through my inbox each year, itβs a little astounding and a little humbling. So many words. So much work. So much heart. So much hope.
10 pm & we got a deal! Long negotiation but everyoneβs happy on all sides! Iβm of the ilk that the best kinds of deals are fair & make everyone, so everyone can be successful as a unit! Publishing is supposed to be a partnership after all! Canβt wait to announce this one!!
Enough people said, "Now you tell me you need stakes in my query's pitch" that I was HORRIBLY worried people don't understand the basic elements of story! So here's a new blog post on: "Back to Basics: Elements of Story and the High-Concept Pitch"
I have SEVEN notifications of offers in my Query Manager inbox to give you an idea of the kinds of choices an agent has to manage. There's only so much time in the day, and so much room on my list.
Just remember your query is the place to give us a short plot summary, but you must ALSO include the STAKES of your story. If I'm curious about your "hook," but you don't tell me what's at stake for your characters, I don't have time to read 90,000 words+/- to find out.
#querytip
Literally, my authors are geniuses. I love them all so much. I mean that. Personally. Professionally. What a wonderful group of talented, caring humans.
I can't possibly read all the querys with offers in my inbox. I am feeling very human and freezing up at the thought of reading/responding to all. π£
Why not jump into the prologue discourse? Iβve signed & sold multiple books with prologues. Though I never call them that. Mentally I call them βfauxloguesβ & set them off with nothing or a symbol. They are usually no more than 2 pages. They arenβt backstory. They are set up.
Yesterday I lost a close, precious family member, and today our Max crossed the rainbow bridge. He was almost eleven. I'm a blubbery mess. But I know he'll make a good companion in heaven, and I can be grateful for that. Bye buddy. Bye aj.
#querytip
querying authors, in your bio if you don't have writing accolades, I still love knowing your day job and some tidbit about you. I read samples first and if I go back to your query, that's often missing (probably to keep things short). I mean, give me a sentence or two!
For transparency, I've seen a bunch of querying authors asking about agents deals, and many don't have access to Publisher's Marketplace, so I've made an attempt to put all mine up on my personal web site. If you're curious, this is me: Deals
It is a truth universally acknowledged that traditional publishing requires patience and a long game. Sure, sometimes things happen rapid fire fast, but thatβs the exception and not the rule. Patience, thick skin and clear-minded expectations are needed if this is your goal.
It took 14 years for my 1st book to get trad. published. I often wanted to give up. I know what it's like to fight despair. Writing is hard. Querying is hard. Holding your published book is amazing. But don't forget that you have SO MUCH worth now. Not just when you're published.
Please, please DON'T PAY someone to get published. Publishers are supposed to PAY YOU. If the trad pub route is not for you (after deep introspection & multiple books queried, etc), then self-publish but don't pay someone $3K+ to publish your book. A workman's worth their wages.
I'm so excited to see so many responses to my MSWL. Seems like I've hit a nerve people are writing in. So let's talk passes on MSWLs. There's more hurt when you respond to one of these & get a pass. The refrain goes, "But this was perfect for her. I gave her what she asked for."
Who all has had a week?
Please raise your hand.
πββοΈππββοΈ πββοΈππββοΈ πββοΈππββοΈ
βCause I feel like this has been a week for a lot of folks.
I am answering queries from October. I am LEGIT behind. The "I will answer in 12 weeks" or its a pass rule does not apply when I get 1000 queries in a 4-month time period. I think some agents are super human & stay on top of their inbox. But, I'm human when it comes to them!
I wish I had more time for pleasure reading as an agent BUT the thing about this job is you often get the pleasure of being one of the FIRST to read something that you know so, so many other people are going to be reading for their own pleasure one day. Itβs a cool job. π
Well, I just got to give THE BEST news to one of my sweet clients who has been with me almost since the beginning. I might have had some tears well up at the same time the joy did. Praise where praise is due!
It's really easy to sit at home & insulate ourselves from what's going on right now. Until it hits you and meets you personally. We are going to lose a friend today, maybe tomorrow. We loved him so much. We love his family so much. I'm so mad at this virus. We are sick, in tears.
I wonder if other agents feel this way. You read a manuscript you love so much, so early on, that you wish you were done with it so you could just offer already, but you savor it instead and kind of just spoon feed it to yourself so can enjoy its every flavor. *that me right now*
Authors please know during this season of the year, multiple offers are coming in. Agents only have so much bandwidth & space on our lists + families & it's the holidays. I have teenagers. So there may be some polite quick step-asides from us.
This is gross. What is this, the 1950βs? If you want to have kids, wonderful. But if you want to run a studio, or a hedge fund, or be a brain surgeon, or high-rise construction worker, more power to you. Literally, what is behind this push to keep women barefoot & pregnant?
I'm thinking about what it was like to be a new literary agent building my list, establishing myself, finding clients to love, meeting like-minded editors, hawkishly watching a quiet inbox, wondering about my future. YOU can do it. It takes time, patience, luck, stick-to-itness.
I'm reading a full manuscript that gives me the same kind of feels as when I read the first Harry Potter book. It's not the same bag of chips, but has that same good-feeling magic to it and a very similar voice, but with a lot more quirk, and that's definitely a good thing...
I do not remember hiring a feline assistant yet he still insists on helping! Credit to my oldest daughter for this snap and saving the laptop from cat-astrophe. π±
#MSWL
Iβm drawn to high-concept commercial fiction with a literary flair! I also love a funny MG voice. I want all the YA & MG (contemporary, sci-fi, fantasy, paranormal). Yes to spooky MG and coming age. Contemporary Romance, Romantic Suspense, (Secular and Inspirational).
There are so many opinions in the world.
Never forget that as you query.
Never forget that as you go on sub.
Never forget that when you're published & the reviews start coming in.
There are so many opinions in the world.
By some miracle, I have managed to read every query in my inbox before reopening on 1/4. If you queried me and did not get a response, your query has been marked for further consideration. Congrats, you are in what I call my βmaybe pile.β
#amquerying
folks... Noticing a trend in my queries today for YA that is too short. Like I'm seeing 50K and 55K YA. Contemporary YA can be around 60-85K (aim for 75-85K) & 60K feels too short for me personally. YA SFF 70-100K (85-95K sweet spot).