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mystery; adult fiction), lawyer, Mama, tree hugger, fan of sports, tea, wine and my husband, words in The Montréal Review
#amwriting
I read A LOT of tweets saying ‘my 1st book got 100 rejections so I shelved it and I’m so glad, bc my 2nd book was way better and now I’m a published author’
And I ‘❤️’ those tweets and such
But F it. This is my first book and it’s good enough to be published
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Teens, even young teens, read Stephen King, Margaret Atwood, Shakespeare, Dickens, Jane Austen and the Brontës
All kinds of ‘adult’ books
So why does a
#YA
manuscript *have to be* sub-75K words and breathlessly fast-paced w simple vocab? Who made these rules?
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I know querying is a numbers game and I thought I was mentally prepared.
But that first (very gentle) rejection hit and my brain immediately goes:
No agent will EVER show interest and I should just throw out my laptop now!
Back at it today tho💜
#amquerying
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Is it just me or are agent likes incredibly sparse this PitMad? I’ve been checking the ‘likes’ on all manner of fabulous pitches all day and I’ve seen 1 legit agent like. Maybe they’re all biding their time??
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#amquerying
@angelajcartier
Lord of the Rings trilogy was Hard. Work. to read - the movies are way better. The world building in those books is great, but chapter after chapter of historical imaginary troll / orc / elf wars is
🥱😴🥱😴🥱
Woo-hoo! I just checked the word count and my YA manuscript is finally, FINALLY under 80K. By a few Ks, actually!
I’m on my 4th (and final??) draft. The 1st draft was over 100K 😅
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#amediting
Went out last weekend with some of my oldest and bestest friends. They’re like WHY haven’t you finished your book yet and WHEN do we get to read it??
… I promised them I’d start querying by the end of this week and I plan to keep my promise 😱😅
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#amediting
WOW I’m crazy close to a 4-digit following! Thank you so much
#WritingCommunity
❤️
Tell me about your work and let’s do a
#writerslift
Here’s my ‘hook’ for my contemporary YA manuscript...
1/2
Paid for a professional editor to look at the first 50 pages of the completed YA mystery I’ve been querying for 6 mos
It’s a lot to take in
Haven’t even looked at her query suggestions bc I can only take so much
Yes it’s just 1 person’s opinion, but let’s be real. She’s right
50 queries sent over the last 5 weeks. Wish me luck!
I’m guessing it will be hard to replicate that in the next 5 weeks as agents close to queries for the holidays. But so far I’ve had some very kind rejections (😆) and 1 full request 🤞
#amquerying
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My
#YA
novel is, at least in part, a love letter to
#London
I’m particularly taken with
#BurlingtonHouse
and the incredible library at the Society of Antiquaries, so this building -and the library- feature in my book 💜
Top photo credit: Fraser Marr
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My first ever full MS beta reader feedback is in and he ‘loved my book’ - I’m over the moon! He said it was so much fun to read 😊🎉
I have to redo chapter 1 (quelle surprise) but the other 30 chapters are ready to go 😀
Springtime querying here I come!!
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I have stumbled into a weird corner of Twitter.
In the last 2 days, I’ve gained over 20 new foreign-language followers. At first I was honoured, but then I translated their bios and they all just give an age, height, and cup size 😬
Happy Mother’s Day everyone! 🤷♀️
A few more short story submissions under my belt and now it’s time to get back to business: revising the start of my contemporary
#YA
manuscript (again) and gearing up to start querying!
#writingcommmunity
#amediting
So I boldly stated 3 weeks ago that I’m now querying, and since then I’ve sent precisely 2 queries. Which puts me on a trajectory to be published … never. But now that I’ve got two under my belt, the rest will just roll off the assembly line, right?
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#amquerying
8yo offered to carry my phone and then, unbeknownst to me, proceeded to take 40 or so pictures 😆
Not gonna lie: kinda like my paparazzi shot 😊
#goodhairday
Thank you
#WritingCommunity
for your PitMad support! My pitch got a 'like' from an agent I follow and was planning to query, so I'm pretty chuffed 😊❤️
I have some fab feedback from beta readers I'm working through, so I'll be ready to query soon. For now
#amediting
I magically figured out everything I need to change to improve my first 2 chapters as I paced around the kitchen today waiting for my tea to brew. Now I just need to ... actually make the changes ...
#amrevising
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Ok I’m ready to be proud of my 2nd round result in my 1st
#NYCMidnight
microfiction 250 contest, even though I was So. Damn. Close. to making the final
Like 1 spot away
Like less than 0.5% away
I’ll be fine
I’m fine 😆😭😐
Congrats to all who entered!
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Never underestimate the power of peer review 👫🏿👬👭👫🏿
I joined a new critique group and we comment on each other’s work and have a video call once a week and it’s AMAZING
#amediting
#Ilovefeedback
WOW the response to this has been amazing ✨
How beautiful that this simple message resonated with so many
My mom’s worried the funeral won’t be well attended (I think lots of people will come). I’ll show her this post and tell her 10K people give their sympathy and hugs ❤️
OK I’ve found myself an
#editing
deadline: June 3rd PitMad! 10 days to finalize the pitch tweet, polish my query letter and, oh yeah, finish revising the first two chapters of my (otherwise finished) manuscript!
#amediting
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I’ve worked hard on my MS over the last week but have to sit this
#PitMad
out 😔 I’m sorry if you put me on your retweet list
I will be retweeting participants tomorrow
And I WILL start querying again before the next PitMad!
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#amediting
Hey
#WritingCommunity
any recommendations for publications I can submit short stories to? I’m new to this and feeling clueless 🙂
... yes I know that was terrible sentence structure and yes my grammar is better in my stories 😐
I have not yet managed to find the time to open my laptop today, but I just walked past it, pointed at it and said:
‘I want to make some magic with you’
Totally normal writer behaviour, right?
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I’m doing the
#RhymingStoryChallenge
and I’m at the ‘Why Oh Why have I done this to myself?!?’ phase of the competition
But honestly, a 600-word rhyming story?? … what was I thinking …
😵💫😆
#NYCMidnight
#amwriting
@whataimeereads_
❤️ I stopped reading and started laughing at ‘is 27 too old for” ❤️
My answer is a resounding NO!
IMHO you’re never too old for a course, a new venture, a degree, etc. I just finished a creative writing course and I loved it (I’m in my 40s)
Happy 75th Birthday to my dad!
He has late-stage Parkinson’s but was able to communicate a bit yesterday, and responded to my ‘Love you, Dad’ by saying ‘Love you’ right back ❤️
Didn’t get any industry likes this PitMad but gained 50 new
#WritingCommunity
friends and read about their AMAZING writing projects ✨📚✨
So well worth it!
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#amquerying
As with muscle mass, musical proficiency, and many other life skills, flexibility builds incrementally and is cumulative
Whatever it is that you want, keep doing it day after day
Dedicate yourself and you can soar
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#inspiration
#amwriting
Photo credit~my dad
I grabbed a paperback while running errands at the drugstore yesterday, hoping for an easy, cozy, Maeve Binchy-type read. Not to be mean but it’s … not good writing 😬
But now as an aspiring author, I’m like, Well if THIS can get published … 😆
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Still going through my parents junk after selling their house 5 years ago and I’m like Why would they keep photos of some random concert from who knows when or where Oh wait
#RollingStones
#MickJagger
#vintageconcert
Just got feedback from my beta reader, who says the opening chapters could be better if I completely re-organize everything I’ve written and begin at the start of Ch 2😭😭. I work slowly, so that’s months of work. What to do ...
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#amediting
#writerschat
The origins of this letter are disputed, but the message is so powerful it's worth sharing for
#EarthDay2021
I found this text tucked in a book a few years ago when I sold my parents' house for them, and just thought 'WOW' and then 'Wait, why haven't I read this before?'
A 🧵
@hhensell
Two years ago a (CDN) $5 bill literally landed in front of me on the street. No one was claiming it so I put it in my wallet and it stayed there. A few weeks later my husband and I were waiting at a long red light and an old man was begging. He got the $5.
An early beta-reader asked if his bookworm 11yo could read my YA book and I was TERRIFIED — my first age-appropriate beta! 😱💀
He sent a picture of her reading the kindle w the message below
The fact she’s into it is like ⭐️🎉🩷
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#writingYA
Last Friday in
#Toronto
it was gloriously sunny with a high of 31.7C. One week later and it’s 3 degrees and snowing 🌨 😆
(For my 🇺🇸 friends, that’s an 89F to 37.5F swing)
Oh
#springtime
why must you screw with us so?
How was the week,
#WritingCommunity
?
I exceeded my weekly word count goal and finished Ch 1 of the new WIP!
Inside the confines of my own mind, it’s intense, compelling and damn near perfect. My wonderful group of beta readers might have other opinions though 🧐😆
#amwriting
I had a tradition for many years of going home to watch Super Bowl with my dad
I absolutely LOVE the NFL (tho I’m 🇨🇦)
My dad has late stage Parkinson’s, so his mind isn’t really there anymore. He’s alive, but tonight in particular I miss who he used to be ❤️
#SuperBowl2023
Yesterday was hot and humid, with a vibrant orange sunset to match. Today was resoundingly cool and overcast, with a gorgeous calm purple to finish the day
#sunsetphotography
#sunset
Got my hands on this lovely book this weekend and already finished reading it. It’s so, so lovely. I’d heard of it but had no idea what it was about - the title alone sold it for me 😆
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#readingcommunity
#MidnightLibrary
@WillieHandler
For some reason, I’m thinking oysters. Look like rocks from the outside, impossibly soft, squishy centre, supposedly an aphrodisiac but might kill you if they’re off …
I’m officially working on draft 4 of my
#YA
MS and new chapter 1 is coming together … slowly
But I woke up yesterday with some fresh ideas for my query letter and now I’m pretty happy with it. Anyone want to do a query swap?
#amediting
#amwriting
#queryswap
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Not gonna lie: bought this book based on the title alone … who says you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover?? 😆
Very enjoyable, quick, quirky (speaks directly to the reader CONSTANTLY) murder mystery 👍🏼
#readersoftwitter
#readingcommunity
I stand for
#StopAsianHateCrimes
not just bc my children are SO proud of their Asian heritage, but because racism is the worst possible intersection of ignorance, narcissism and mean-spiritedness
Everyone say it together: I'm not better than anyone. And no one is better than me.
An excerpt from *The Shadows*, the
#microfiction
ghost story I wrote for Round 2 over the weekend
‘Absence has form,’ Grandmother whispered. ‘Look into the mirror at the top of the stairs, child. Tell me what you see.’
#NYCMidnight
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I’m in a crap mood. Want to stomp all over some romantic notions with me??
DYK the reason we say stupid things like ‘know it off by heart’ and ‘think w your ❤️ and not your head’ is that
#Aristotle
(super genius & full-on misogynist) mixed up the functions of the ♥️ and 🧠?
Vacationing within my own province with my family this week
With less than half a percent of the world’s population and 20% of the world’s freshwater, I’m feeling very lucky and very grateful ❤️🇨🇦❤️🇨🇦❤️
#Canada
#lakes
#wetlands
#Ontario
#Muskoka
#LakeRosseau
Spent over 2 hours this morning doing all the prep required for one query. ONE. 😵💫
Part of the reason it took so long was that I’d never seen this before: ‘Please share a favourite sentence from the MS you’re submitting’ - that was kinda fun!
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#writersoftwitter
When 16-year-old Cece uncovers a feud between a local Ottawa family and one of the wealthiest families in England, she is drawn into the outrageous world of London’s High Society, and to a discovery that will set the art world alight
Like everyone, I occasionally get discouraged (read: yesterday sucked)
But then I open Scrivener to a random bit and I’m like ‘ooh, I love this part’! I adore my characters, and have scenes that make me laugh or tear up even on the 50th read. So I keep going 🙂
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