13 yrs ago, when I first started writing, I lived on a farm & couldn’t afford a laptop, so I wrote my first screenplay on this secondhand blackberry.
This year, that same screenplay was picked up by a US producer for their 2022 development slate.
Don’t despise small beginnings.
SO HERE’S MY BIG NEWS
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Last month I was hired as a staff
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on the South African adaptation of UGLY BETTY. Yesterday the producers called me & asked me to take over the project as headwriter. I’m honored, humbled & grateful to head up this iconic series.
YAY 4 OPPORTUNITIES: I was approached by a producer I’ve written on 3 shows for. She wants to partner with me to put together a comedy series for Netflix. She’s offered me an executive producer credit as well as IP ownership and profit share. I’ll take that deal
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NEWSFLASH:
Everyone doesn’t have to love your script. In fact, only TWO people need to love it; you, and the person that wants to buy/make it.
So here’s the plan:- write the script, then find that other person.
That’s it. Everything else is just noise.
STAGES OF WRITING:
1. EUPHORIA: Best idea I’ve ever conceived😃😍
2. REALISM: how do I write this?🤔😕
3. DEPRESSION: Who thought of this nonsensical piece of crap? 🤬😭
4. RESOLVE: I think I can make it work😢
5. RELIEF: Can’t believe I finished that😅
I’m at
#3
, and you?
SOME GREAT NEWS
My business partners & I finally closed a deal we’ve worked on since 2018, a 26 Ep drama series.
I’ll be Headwriter, but I’m also an Executive Producer with an ownership share for the first time ever😭
Ownership is a huge step fwd for me. We begin in October.
OMG THIS KID CAN WRITE😭
I'm reading through the latest draft of my daughter's Viking world screenplay, and honestly, I'm stunned. I know it's my kid, but lawd I wish I had her talent. This girl is going to go places I never could. Here's an extract.
#ProudDaddy
🥰
JUST WOW!
Had a zoom meeting with a young writer who wanted me to be his script editor. Zero experience with a continental size ego because he finished film school last year. Had no idea about about development process but rejected everything I advised him. Don’t be like this.
So my new week started off with a bang.
Got a call from a producer this morning:
“You know that script you wrote for me 4 years ago? Well I have a bunch of people interested in it. Can you do a short video on why you wrote it?”
Um...
Morning fam.
Happy New Week everyone
I entered the exact, same script in 6 screenplay contests in a single year. NO CHANGES. Here’s what happened, in order:
Comp 1 - No placing.
Comp 2 - 2nd round.
Comp 3 - Quarter finals.
Comp 4 - Semi finals.
Comp 5 - Finals.
Comp 6 - I won.
Draw your own conclusions.
Incredibly excited to have been hired as script consultant on an upcoming film about the great King Shaka, the most famous monarch of the Zulu nation. The film is based on a book and Shaka’s story is being told from a unique and fascinating angle.
Dreams do come true
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. 6 years ago I lived on a farm in Africa & worked a dead end job in a hardware store, desperate to be a professional screenwriter. Today I run a TV show & I have a manager in LA. If I could do it, so can you. Never, ever give up on your dream
My manager came back from Sundance with great news. A major studio is interested in reading my script. In fact the exec reminded him 3 times before he got home. Major agency on board. Talent on board. Producer on board. His final comment "The pump is primed. Send the script."😱
HOORAY FOR PAID WORK:
I’ve just been hired as a writer and script editor on the South African adaptation of Ugly Betty. The contract is worth 6 months salary.
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#gratitude
ART CAN CHANGE THE WORLD
The tallest tree in Wales got damaged by a storm and was supposed to be cut down, instead chainsaw artist Simon O'Rourke found a better solution to symbolize the tree’s last attempt to reach the sky. This moves me in a way I can’t explain.
I’m honored & excited to have been hired this pass week as headwriter on a new 13 part dramedy. I’m looking fwd to being back in the story room.
If you’re from KZN Durban, have experience as a TV writer, traceable references & good samples, indicate in the comments.
DON’T DM ME
What this says is, if it took that many rewrites in a professional script development environment with pro writers and proper budgets just to get to a good, shootable draft, stop being so F-ing critical of yourself and others about their early drafts with none of those resources.
Screenwriter Twitter is criticising the first page of the Mare of Easttown pilot, but I’m over here screaming about the cover. Somebody get their script coordinator a drink and a raise.
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CAREER TIP:
If you intend building an industry career, there are TWO essential elements that must BOTH be developed... the WRITING & the WRITER.
Neglect either, & you’re setting yourself up for failure. So hone both your CRAFT & your CHARACTER.
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REMINDER:
Please be gracious when critiquing scriptwriters based on a film or show. The story you see on screen, is not always the story the writer originally penned. Making movies is a complicated, lengthy process. Sometimes the vision gets lost or sacrificed.
Morning family❤️
PRO SCREENWRITING TIP:
If you’re serious about breaking in, treat your writing as a career not a hobby, and your script as a product not a personal project.
SO THIS HAPPENED
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Just got cc’d in an email from a producer to my manager, wanting to option a feature film of mine😳. What the hell’s going on with 2020? It’s like it’s trying to seduce me🙈
Saw a post by a writer who just finished draft 1 of his 1st screenplay & was asking advice on how to sell it.
I advised him to get notes from experienced readers & to rewrite several times, then put the script aside & write 2 more. He said that wasn't the advice he was seeking.
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TIP:
I like to create floor plans for my script locations & gather pictures of what they look like on Pinterest. It helps me visualize the space & the characters movements within the space. I can also choose my scene settings more intelligently.
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UNPOPULAR OPINION:
Not every story has to be some complex, deep, meaningful, life-changing narrative.
Some stories are meant to be nothing more than unadulterated, unapologetic, entertaining, epic fun.
And I’m totally okay with writing that.
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, it’s 25th June here, my 50th birthday. My 2020 gifts:
Won
@finaldraftinc
Big Break.
Hired to write a feature for 1 of the directors of DOCTOR WHO.
Signed by Plain Text Management.
Hired as headwriter of a new TV show.
Bought back the family home we lost.
Look, if someone like me, with every disadvantage & no industry knowledge or contacts, could break in & carve out a career in his 40s, so can you. If I listened to the naysayers I'd still be packing paint in a hardware store instead of creating a show for Netflix
#ChaseYourDream
ATTENTION EMERGING WRITERS IN THE
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I’d like to run a free workshop mid-July on basic story structure & major turning points.
If you’re a NEW writer/screenwriter, who hasn’t had an opportunity to study, be optioned, or be hired, DM me if you’re interested.
Got a call from a production company, informing me, a television episode I wrote last year, is being put forward for some award thingy thingy. Maybe I’ll walk the virtual red carpet this year in a tux top and pajama bottoms🤣
I had no experience in the industry when I discovered screenwriting at age 39, working in a hardware store, in a rural town. All I knew is, it excited me like nothing else, & wanted to tell stories for the rest of my life. It doesn’t matter when you birth your dream. Pursue it!
Currently writing a feature script where the protagonist is alone for a large part of the story. Boy it’s tough. Hats off to the writers and actors of I AM LEGEND and CAST AWAY.
Screw screenwriting rules, I’m writing a 300 page deeply personal, contained drama with mostly dialogues & monologues, all formatted in my own special way, with background pictures. Can’t wait to sell that sucker for loads of $$$. Buyers will be lining up!
5 LESSONS I’VE LEARNED:
1. It’s okay to celebrate other writers’ successes.
2. There’ll always be ppl more talented than me, & that’s okay.
3. Not everyone will❤️my writing, & that’s okay.
4. Being nice takes you far.
5. Hard work trumps talent.
Morning
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Just got a call to write on a new show. I’m grateful & humbled by the work that keeps coming my way. I’ve never been busier.
Conduct yourself with kindness & integrity, strive for excellence, value & nurture your relationships with people, & hopefully, it will come back to you.
ARE WE A GOOD MATCH?
I need a writing partner for 2021. Here’s a little about me. I write full time. I’m comfortable in both tv & film. I have writing room experience as a writer, script editor, storyliner & headwriter. I’m repped. My genres - action, horror, comedy & thriller.
GOOD THINGS KEEP HAPPENING
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Received news today that a deal I’ve been working on for a year is finally happening; a feature for 1 of the directors of BBC’s Doctor Who.
A few hrs later a local producer called to ask if I’m available for 2 more projects.
ME:
So a funny thing happened today.
In 2018 I wrote a movie for a producer. Long story short, he only paid me half my fee and claimed poverty. Needless to say our relationship ended on sour terms.
Today I learned, by pure chance, the movie was made and released last year. Can't
Just got an email from my manager saying we have an agent from a big Hollywood agency on board my feature project now. Momentum is being gained I dare say. I'm in the final stages of the polish. He's off to Sundance for meetings etc. Hope we can get this thing set up and off to
IMHO the script you’re currently writing, that you’re determined to sell, & are convinced will start a bidding war, might not sell, but it may be the script that gets someone to say, “Hey, this person can write” or, “So what else have you got?”, & in my book, both are solid wins.
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CAREER TIP:
If you aspire to work in the TV industry, here are some life skills you can work on in anticipation of getting there
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1. Learn to deal with criticism.
2. Learn to handle pressure.
3. Learn to manage time.
4. Learn to communicate.
Do NOT send out your script before it’s ready.
Do NOT send out your script before it’s ready.
Do NOT send out your script before it’s ready.
Do NOT send out your script before it’s ready.
Do NOT send out your script before it’s ready.
Do NOT send out your script before-
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tip:
Dear emerging writers in the
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I know we’re in a time when everyone is battling white privilege, etc. but when it comes to screenplays:
WHITE SPACE IS YOUR FRIEND!
Don’t clutter the page with large chunks of action/description/dialogue🙏🏽
I absolutely love creating tv shows and running the writing room. So glad I found my passion. Even though it was late in life by some people’s standards, it came when I was ready for it, when life had already built into me what I needed to succeed at it. I’m grateful for that.
My writing room for my new show is all female, and consists of 6 young writers of color. I will be mentoring them as well as overseeing them. They're all talented and deserve this opportunity. I'm in my happy place.
True DIVERSITY goes far beyond putting POC into acting roles and writing rooms in the industry. It also means empowering us to tell OUR stories, OUR way, and appreciating those narratives for what they are, instead trying to squeeze them into Eurocentric story molds.
WOWZERS
I was approached to do a script edit on an Indian feature but asked for an assessment 1st, so I did one for free.
Today they reverted, & based on my assessment requested a full rewrite, agreed to pay 5 times the original fee, & offered me a screen credit.
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DO YOU NEED HELP WITH STORY STRUCTURE?
If so, here are some simple graphic tools to propel you on your way to story beat god tier. Remember, story structure is natural and fun.
Don’t know who needs to hear this in my
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but at some point, after all the preparation, contemplation, advice, anxiety, excuses and procrastination, you’re going to have to throw caution to the wind and just say “Screw it all” and write the damn script you want.
I like that performance of his where he pretends to be part of the
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, enters loads of
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comps and takes opportunities away from emerging writers struggling to get a break in the industry. Gripping stuff.
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TIP:
Every scene should accomplish at least 1 or a combination of these 3 basic goals:
1. Move your plot forward.
2. Reveal more about your character.
3. Explore your theme.
Good morning
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, wishing you a day full of energy and productivity.
So this happened
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. We moved into this house on the 1st of June. 2 days later our beloved cat, Lord Beerus Sama(DBZ character), ran away and never returned. We searched all over for him. This morning, 24 October, he returned, walked in and made himself at home 😳
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tip:
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beware of the phrase:
“He/she realizes...”
We use it to absolve ourselves of the responsibility to construct a visible plan of action for a character. Instead of making the character work to find an answer, they magically “realize” it.
I didn't get lucky.
I got inspired, I got focused, I got informed, I got skilled, I got busy, I got consistent, I got productive, I got experienced, I got excellent, I got positioned, and then I got rewarded.
Some ppl want millions of $$$, fame, or awards, & that's ok. All I want is a farm, where I can raise some livestock, plant a vegetable garden, hike with my kids, play with my dogs, write 1 script a year, & end every night sitting on my porch watching the sun go down with my love.
Anyone have any inside info on which screenplay contests Shia is entering this quarter? Asking for a friend, just so he can, you know... not enter those.
YASSS!!! I DID IT!
I can’t believe it. I’ve finally finished the rewrite of my feature and I’ve sent it off to my manager.
I was dubious I could pull the notes off, but I’m soooo pleased with the results. The script has taken a quantum leap forward.
What a way to start 2021!
If we’re giving someone notes, we should respect their sense of story and strive to help them tell THEIR story better, and not try to force them to tell the story the way we think it should be told. After all, it’s their story, not ours.
STAGES OF WRITING:
1. EUPHORIA: My best idea I’ve ever!😃
2. REALISM: How do I write this?🤔
3. DEPRESSION: Who thought of this nonsensical piece of crap?🤬😭
4. RESOLVE: I think I can make it work.😢
5. RELIEF: Can’t believe I finished that!😅
I’m at
#4
now. And you?
FEELING DISCOURAGED?
Remember, if a simple guy like me from Africa, who started late, had no industry experience, no film school training, lived on a farm, worked in a hardware store + 2 other jobs to support a family, could end up running TV shows, so can you.
#ChaseYourDream
SA UPDATE 5:
I made a decision today to evacuate my family from the area, it’s too volatile. I need to know they’re safe so I can focus. Moved them in with family so we can pool resources. This video is where last night’s action took place. In all this I still have work deadlines
THE TRUTH IS...
You’re better than you think you are.
You’ve achieved more than you give yourself credit for.
You’re further than you think you’ve come.
And you’re far closer than you can possibly imagine.
SO DON’T YOU DARE GIVE UP NOW!
HISTORY IN THE MAKING❤️
Today my kids and I launched our own writing room. We’ll be breaking and writing our original stories here. They have the talent, but this is where it will be developed, where they will learn their craft and the principles and process of the writing room.
Got a call, out the blue, from a British producer and showrunner that I worked with in 2017 on a Netflix series for Ebony Life TV, Nigeria.
Might have some big news soon. Prayers and good vibes appreciated. Watch this space, will keep y’all updated.
Great news
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. The producers and commissioning editor loved the work I did on the series bible, it’s been approved, we launch the story room on Monday. I’m so relieved and excited. It really was worth putting in all that extra work and sacrifice.
SOME GOOD NEWS TODAY
My UK director/producer is happy with the fleshed-out outline I sent him. I’m moving on to first draft of the script.
Also, a script I wrote in 2019, that was selected to be pitched at the Berlin Film Festival, will finally go into production in Jan 2022.